Reviews
Cat Wynn, author of Airplane Games
"River Ari did a development edit for me and their comments were concise but also detailed with a sharp eye for story beats and high level story themes. They were incredibly prompt and delivered feedback in a very palatable way which we all know is a talent and an art. Their feedback was also clear and focused. Highly recommend if you're looking for help on taking your manuscript to the next level."
Roger Sandri, author of The Den of Stone
"River's annotations ... were key in improving The Den of Stone, pinpointing the areas needing revisions while also giving a boost with positive notes. They have a keen eye for redundancy, grammar, and typographical errors. I'm thrilled with the work they've done to make Den of Stone a published novel I can be proud of. I know who I’m working with in the future."
Neil Bullock, author of Nexus
"I hired [River] to edit Nexus. It was an awesome and educational journey.... Need an editor? I highly recommend [River.] Always kind and constructive. Your manuscript will be so much better."
Lottie Lucille
"Best script doctor ever."
"River is the best editor in my arsenal. They’re kind and keen-eyed, with a knack for pacing and amplifying tension. They cheer wholeheartedly for your characters, and help pinpoint their core arcs. They see what makes your story unique, and help sharpen those elements so they shine.
Can’t recommend River enough."
Nikki McComas-Jimenez, author of Nefarious Desires
"River did a development edit for me. They were so detailed and concise! Loved all the comments and helpful feedback. They were prompt and delivered feedback in the most kind way. Such a warm-hearted person. I will be using them for lines and such! They have such a good eye for redundancies, grammar, and prose. Can't wait for everything else we do together! You need them in your corner! ... [River] inspired me to keep going."
Mandy Rodrigues
"Working with them is a genuine delight. River tackles everything: developmental issues, character and tone, pacing, sensitivity issues, down to line edits. Their takes on neurodiverse and queer realities, particularly, are golden, since River has a vast experience with both. Their style is honest and objective, often surgical, without ever being harsh or judgemental. River knows how to praise your good assets while showing you where and how you can do better.... Recommend them to everyone!"